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1376be65e554d797d0ffb10466b489d8e0d23e8b-PR-71

Pull #71

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amacgregor 
Copy edit the services page

A seven-sweep pass. The page was already strong on voice and risk
reversal — the gaps were proof and one borrowed phrase.

Proof. Track 03 sells Code Health Check, Vibecode Rescue and Due
Diligence, and eleven public audits do exactly that work against a
published rubric. The page never mentioned them, so the strongest
available evidence was sitting one click away and unlinked. It now says
so and links both the rubric and the results. The writing FAQ links
/publications for the same reason: the claim was there, the backing was
not.

"Many clients begin with a Health Check" invited the question how many,
which is not a question this page wants asked. Now "most engagements
start with", which claims the pattern without implying a census.

Voice. "Move the needle" was the only borrowed phrase on a page that
elsewhere says "not vibes" and "not theater". Replaced with "change the
outcome".

Specificity. "Regular updates" became "a written update every week" — a
commitment rather than a gesture. "Investor-grade reports" became
"reports written for a diligence process", because the adjective was
doing a noun's work.

Friction. The contact address was obfuscated as "allan [at]
allanmacgregor.com", which stopped deterring harvesters years ago and
still costs the click. It is now a mailto link.

Also drops the leading + from the AgentOps chip, which read as a
rendering artifact.

Three edits were proposed and deliberately not applied, because they are
Allan's calls rather than an editor's: naming the reader's problem in the
header, making "without the full-time cost" concrete, and defining the
ten package names that currently appear once each and are explained
nowhere.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
Pull Request #71: Copy edit the services page

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